Friends are the people who care about you.
They are the ones that make you happy.
They might make you sad
or mad.
when you get mad at a friend
just remember
they are your friend.
Friends don’t lie to you.
They might cry for you
Friends make me feel that i'm not alone in life
They are the ones that support you and your decisions and
Choice’s
Friends are the one’s if you fall on the ground
your friend will pick you Back up.
Friend’s care about you & love you
Only real friends know when your nervous
Angry sad.
If i didn’t have friends in my life I would be lonely.
And sad.
Finding Friends are like find diamond’s there hard to find but shiny &
Bright.
By Ethan Shields
Kia Ora Ethan my name is Alexandria I am a year six student at Paihia School in Te Ngahere. I really like your blog post about your poem about friends. I like how you put the line Finding Friends are like find diamond’s there hard to find but shiny & bright. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteAlexandria
Hi my name is Nikhil and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. This poem describes exactly what a friend would act like. Maybe next time you do a poem you could do smaller sentences so it is easier to rhyme .If you want to go to my blog go to https://wpsnikhilg.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan, My name is Hope from Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way you described your poem about friends because you are right. If you didn't have friends you will be sad and lonely but if you did have friends you won't be lonely.may be next time you could improve more and change the font of your writing.if you want to check out my blog here is the link. http://wpshopem.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi Ethan,my name is Grace from Waikowhai Primary School. I really like the way you did a poem about your friends and you are very kind because you take care of your friends. You could change the font and the background colours.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work and be helpful to other people.
If you wanna see my blog.
http://wpsgraceh.blogspot.com/