One Bright day people coming In the cool shoe Shop everyday to get new shoes but I was new that day my name was doctor shoe weeks for waiting to get picked but one day I got picked I was happy they got me and then the danger comes the kid put his foot In my Mouth so I was going die by smelly feet but I didn't Thank Shoe God but we were never ever going to be friends with a human so doctor shoe went to his evil dungeon want nope It was even worse his home so he took me of his feet so I ran there was no way out so I hide for weeks.
It's been Four weeks what nope 5 minutes he still can’t find doctor shoe so the human ran to his a friends house so I had time to run but HE CAME BACK with his Friends The human put his foot In my mouth and got a Ball AND THEY PLAYED SOCCER! Doctor shoe was SCREAMING LOUD! But he can’t get out of the field so It was week six again really only 10 minutes he went to a place called school Doctor shoe Find a lot of his kind shoes get muddy grassy EVEN GUM so doctor shoe was free he ran and told The shoes to fight back KILL ALL HUMANS! So they Fight back at those humans and beaten them up with shoelaces It did nothing to the humans so the bell RING! And the humans are wearing my kind again FIGHT BACK! We can't there to strong so doctor shoe made the shoe It's called GUMBOOTS the biggest shoe ever made.
But the gumboot was die by mud and THE WORST RAIN!! But the humans won this round but we can destroy all humans 4 years nope 15 minutes later he made It out alive he made a army of shoes HE Made GUMBOOTS and even more shoes he made SHOPZILLA!! So the shoes fight back at the humans And the shoes WON the humans got destroyed aka went home so SHOPZILLA!! Scared the Humans off YA!!!! Said the shoes. So Doctor shoe doctor shoe was the king of shoes but even more humans came wait those are not humans THEY'RE ANIMALS RUN said the shoes. SHOPZILLA Died by and big DOGZILLA!!! AKA Pug The shoes got killed by ANIMALS Doctor shoe was the only one left but SHOES CAN DIE THE END.
hi Ethan I'm Jyvhen your recount is pretty cool but have you considered to put a ending statement because I don't see one bye
ReplyDeleteHello Ethan I loved your story! But maybe you should check your punctuation to make your writing a bit better. Just for help. I also like that you had Shoe God in your story. Very creative!
ReplyDeleteHello Ethan I loved your story! But maybe you should check your punctuation to make your writing a bit better. Just for help. I also like that you had Shoe God in your story. Very creative!
ReplyDeletehello Eden my name ethan thank you for commenting on my blog (:
ReplyDelete