Monday, 27 June 2016

My Survival Backpack
Water Bottle.
Phone.
Clothes.
Knife.
Fruit.
Plasters.
Charger.
I'm Getting A Water Bottle So I Want Thirst And Get A Phone So I Can Contact People And A Knife So I Won't Get Hurt Plasters As Well Clothes So Want Get Cold Or Dirty And Fruit To Eat And A Charger So Your Phone Want Go Dead...
                

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5 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 July 2016 at 09:58

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  2. Anonymous4 July 2016 at 10:05

    Nice work Ethan, I think you could add more to the list so think deeper like you forgot matches if you wanted to start a fire.

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  3. Madison4 July 2016 at 10:20

    Hey Ethan it is really cool but just cheek the sentences I mean like just make sure it has the words you want on it or you dont the fact is I like it :)

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  4. Anonymous2 August 2016 at 10:44

    Hi Ethan,
    i like how you know mostly what to have in a survival backpack but if you needed to survive then your phone would be the least of your worry's and you would probably not have any reception to make any calls or texts but i like the way you are already for when and if something happens :)

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  5. Anonymous3 August 2016 at 20:37

    Hi Ethan,I like the way your smart to survive because those specific essentials are very useful to survive.Next time,could you put some commas and full stops in your explanation so the reader can take a breath and continue reading the sentences.

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